Do you like the plot of my story?

Well...my story is about a girl who had a really difficult past. Her father was a heavy drinker and abused the girls mother and the girl herself. When she was 5, he came home and for no reason, beat you mom. He came on top of her with a knife to her throat and said if you scream I'll kill you. He rips off his clothes and his wife's to. He s her. Then he said I lied and slit her throat. He left the house. The little girl witnesses all of this and is traumatized. She ends up in an orphanage. The kids at her kindergarten tease her because she is an orphan. Then one day, she goes home to the orphanage and was told that she had to live with Mrs. and Ms. Cull(i just put some random last name. If you can give me a better one, I would really appreciate it!) And they take her in and love her...like real parents do. But one day, a man comes into the home and s Mrs. Cull and cuts her throat right in front of the little girl. Mr. Cull comes home and sees his wife on the ground, dead. He grabs his gun and shoots himself. The little girl witnesses all of this and is traumatized. She ends up going from foster home to foster home, being abused by her care givers. When she is 15 years old she is rapped by her foster dad and runs away. She lives on the streets and couldn't get a job so she went hungry. She went to the profession of prostitution to get money for food. One day, the guy who was sleeping with her for pay, beats her and doesn't give her the money. She goes hungry that day. The next day she is crying and saying "Why...why...why" repeatedly.Then she feels the prescience of someone so she looks up. It was a very good looking guy who was staring at her. He had hypnotizing green eyes. He walked towards her and said that it'll be aright so don't worry. Then he vanishes in thin air. The next day, you go hungry again. The next day she is even more depressed for it was the day her parents (foster parents but she considered them as her as her real parents) died. The pain she was in was un- bearable she grabbed a knife and was slitting her wrists. "STOPP!!" someone yelled. It was the boy from the other day. The girl looked up and shook her head. "No." she said quietly and resumed to cutting her self. The boy comes running and grabs her hand with the knife. He said looked into the girl's eyes she asked "Why?" and ped out. He carried her to the hospital. When she woke up he was sitting on a chair in the far side of the room. He slowly walked to the bed the girl was in looking into her eyes. "Why... why?" He waited for her to finish. "Why didn't you let me die? I've been through to much. I wanted to die!" she screamed. "Because I...I...I didn't want you to die."he said. He said looking at her steadily with his eyes. "Why?" she asked softly, crying. He held her hand and kissed her on the cheek. "Because I didn't want you to die." he repeated. "You don't know what I have gone through! You don't know how it feels!" She told him what happened in her life and he listened to everything. When she finished, he looked at her thoughtfully. "I know how it feels..." he said and slowly moved toward each other. Their lips met softly. The kiss turned from very pionate to urgent. They end up having in the hospital room. When the girl has fully recuperated from her injuries, the boy (I still have not thought of his name!) asks the girl(idk what her name is yet... can you think of a name?) is she could be his girlfriend and she said yes. She moves in with him and they love each other very, very much. They end up having 3 kids. The End!!!!!!!! Sooo do you like? Should I change any thing?